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This photo was taken my graduation gala on  November 27 of 2015, in a very dizzy time of my life. I turned 18 the day before,also I had graduated from school, where I spent 12 years of my life and in two days more I had to give the PSU test, without knowing what to study.
Despite of all this pressure, it was a wonderful night where I received all the love from the people that really matter to me, especially the two families that I have, I mean two families because I'm like a member of my best friend's family.
On the photo, named from the left, are: my brother, my mom, my grandma, my dad, myself (dressed in calypso, my favorite color),my best friend, her brother, her sister, her mom and her dad. 
Arelly or Arellita, as I prefer to call her, is more than my best friend. She's like the sister I always wanted to have, she's been the one who has supported me in the most difficult moments along my life. She always makes me laugh with her stupidities, we have infinite anecdotes together and although both of us have a very busy life, we see each other often to talk about everything that has happened to us. 
Two years before we left the school, I began to relate more with her family, I spent a lot of time at her house so I became like an adoptive daughter for her parents.
I feel very happy about the relationship we have among all, because our moms get along very well, just like my daddy with his brother and my brother with my best friend.
This photo is very special to me, because it's the only one where we are all together, I feel very happy every time I see it, because it reminds me that I have wonderful people at my side that love me as much as I do.

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  1. Very minor mistakes. The text is coherent on the overall and very cohesive due to the good use of chohesive devices.

    Corrections:
    taken my graduation gala on November 27= taken at my graduation gala on November 27th


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Evaluation of blog experience

The experience of blogging in an english class has been a personal challenge. I had never have a blog, neither in Spanish nor in English so I had to learn from the beginning how it works. Firstly it was difficult to write again in english because it was a full last year without learning or practicing anything about english. Lately the rules of grammar and how to pronounce the words it was the most difficult for me. So, when I started to write blogs I was afraid about don't writing them correctly but it was easier when I knew I can write about topics that interest me. It has made it easier for me to write the correct words. That is why my writing skills have developed in part, although I feel they could be developed further during the next English course. In my future I would like to write in English about different topics of my interest like music, series and something I love as cultural events.

Autobiography

My name is Michelle Garnica Morales, I was born on November twenty sixth of 1997 in San Bernardo of Chile. I am 19 years old, I live in a beautiful house in San Bernardo with my mother and my brother, I studied in the same school for twelve years “Colegio Inglés Isaac Newton”. I like animals because I have three dogs, three frogs and nine rabbits, I like to make crafts, I like to watch movies and series, I like to read and write and I like to practice swimming and pilates. I choose to study journalism in Universidad de Chile, at Christmas because I didn´t know what I really wanted to study and my parents didn´t let me take a year off. Anyway, I like my career and all the experiences and the people I have met.