This photo was taken my graduation gala on November 27 of 2015, in a very dizzy time of my life. I turned 18 the day before,also I had graduated from school, where I spent 12 years of my life and in two days more I had to give the PSU test, without knowing what to study.
Despite of all this pressure, it was a wonderful night where I received all the love from the people that really matter to me, especially the two families that I have, I mean two families because I'm like a member of my best friend's family.
On the photo, named from the left, are: my brother, my mom, my grandma, my dad, myself (dressed in calypso, my favorite color),my best friend, her brother, her sister, her mom and her dad.
Arelly or Arellita, as I prefer to call her, is more than my best friend. She's like the sister I always wanted to have, she's been the one who has supported me in the most difficult moments along my life. She always makes me laugh with her stupidities, we have infinite anecdotes together and although both of us have a very busy life, we see each other often to talk about everything that has happened to us.
Two years before we left the school, I began to relate more with her family, I spent a lot of time at her house so I became like an adoptive daughter for her parents.
I feel very happy about the relationship we have among all, because our moms get along very well, just like my daddy with his brother and my brother with my best friend.
This photo is very special to me, because it's the only one where we are all together, I feel very happy every time I see it, because it reminds me that I have wonderful people at my side that love me as much as I do.

Very minor mistakes. The text is coherent on the overall and very cohesive due to the good use of chohesive devices.
ResponderEliminarCorrections:
taken my graduation gala on November 27= taken at my graduation gala on November 27th
GRADE: 7.0